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Feras Moualla

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مُساهمة  زينة مراد الثلاثاء مارس 10, 2009 8:39 pm

flower Embarassed hiii
this my aricle about the greatest swimmer Feras Moualla
Born in Damascus in 1971. Graduated form the Faculty of Law, Damascus University
He is one of the best swimmers in Syria and the world. He is the elderest among his brothers, but he is the shortest
he is good looking
He
has the best achievements and he is considered the most superior among his brothers and sisters
now he is the most important person in sport institutions and in the Sports Federation
He has the largest number of successes, achievements and he is the most important person who crossed the sea between Cyprus and Syria, without interruption
And he registered in a Guinness record for that .His most favorite clothes for work are the official ,but in his school to teach swimming the most comfortable clothes, are swimming wear and sports wear
He is the best

Zeena
Al Gouzlanya elementary school

Teacher Manl Masoud lol!

زينة مراد

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تاريخ التسجيل : 10/02/2009

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Feras Moualla Empty good zaina but

مُساهمة  آمنة الأربعاء مارس 11, 2009 2:58 pm

good zaina but don't put the word article at the begning of your article and use the passive
in recorded
we say was recorded

T Amna Eid

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تاريخ التسجيل : 09/01/2009

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