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مُساهمة  رند المعايطه الخميس مارس 05, 2009 11:32 am

Active And Lazy Student
Jina and Inas are twins , eleven years old in 5th grade , they live in Kerak city with their small family , Dad ,Mum and their brother Samer who is eight years old .
Jina and Inas came back home from school , Jina rushed happily into her mum's room , telling her every thing happened in her class talked to her showing her grsdes , she took off her school uniform , she had lunch after one hour break she started doing her homework.
In the evening the family had light meal or dinner , then Jina watched TV for one or two hours . About nine o'clock she went to bed .
Where as Inas got back home 15 minutes later after her sister . When her mum asked her about the school or homework , Inas told lies , sometimes Inas says teacher absent or no homework was given , When her mum asked Inas to do her homework as well as Jina did , she said no homework or no exams .
Next day morning Jina waked up early prepared herself for going to school while Inas was sleeping her mum shouted ''wake up Inas '' no answer from Inas
One day their mum decided to visit the school to ask the teachers about her daughters
the teacher showed her their marks and their results Jina was active and excellent , Inas was a lazy student.

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Rand Ali Al Ma'aitah
5th grade
Al Ghweir Secondary School For Girls
Al Kerak - Jordan

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مُساهمة  آمنة الخميس مارس 05, 2009 1:35 pm

Good Rand
It is a good story,but there aren't comparative adjectives in your story

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